23 Nov
This is the link to Asifa Zunaidah’s original post reblogged here with thanks. (with Urdu addition.)

Khamosh sama
Khula aasmaa
Thandi purvaiya
Udthe panchi
Udthi Hawai jahaz
Unche takt par sirf mai
Aur meri dhadkane
Har khayal ghumshuda
Sirf ehsaas jeene ka…

خاموش سماں
کھلا آسماں
ٹھنڈی پروییا
اڑتے پنچھی
اڑتے ہوایی جہاز
اونچے تخت پر صرف میں
اور میری دھڑکنیں
ہر خیال گمشدہ
صرف احساس جینے کا

Silent evening
Open sky
Chilly air
Flying birds
And aeroplanes
On a high pedastal only me
And my heartbeats
Every thought lost
In the feeling of being alive…


Posted by on November 23, 2012 in Urdu Poetry


3 responses to “EHSAAS (FEELINGS)

  1. Asifa Zunaidha

    November 25, 2012 at 4:23 am

    Thank you so much, dear Sir for the kind gesture 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • shakilakhtar

      November 26, 2012 at 4:14 pm

      I am glad that you are not angry instead for putting your stuff here. I was fascinated with the simplicity and candidness of your ehsaas and the way it has been fluidly expressed. thanks to you Asifa Ji. 🙂

  2. Rafiullah Mian

    November 26, 2012 at 7:13 pm

    Nice and simple words..
    Thanks for sharing with us 🙂


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